DOUBLE BLADE

If it's one thing

to feel

the sting

of loneliness; 

It's another

to smell

the stench

of indifference...

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Double blade, double pain/hurting...anyone might have experienced that, Neil. Minsan pa nga "sapin-sapin" ang problema, patung-patong din ang sakit.
I suggest you use a comma instead of a period after the first verse.
Keep writing.

[NeiL ArandA]

That is so true Dhaye. You nailed the thought. It's like a war. You win some and lose some. Anything you gain it will come at an expense. Thanks for stopping by an dropping your thoughts on my page.

[gabrielle]

Typo error on "its". Interesting title, neil but i am still trying to figure out the connection of the title to the content.

[NeiL ArandA]

It was a rush for me to put the thoughts right away without figuring out the title. So I change it to this one.