My old friend

My old friend

A Poem by Mads
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A poem about giving someone a second chance. Will submit to the contest "Second Chances"

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A new beginning,
with my old friend.

Our arguments,
now come to an end.

I try to forgive and 
live a life full of trust,
but all of my work could be turned into dust.

I´ll write them a letter to apologise,
I hope for them to answer and be wise.

What might be going through my old friends head?
Will they take their second chance once the letter is read?

I remember the fun we had as friends,
I hope to see their smile again.

Yes, there must be a second chance,
for our friendship is strong and it will last!

© 2020 Mads


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You have a good outlook. Life will beat you down eventually, it's an inevitability ... but if you can keep even a shadow of this kind of outlook over long periods of time, it will serve you well. It will be your old friend truly.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mads

3 Months Ago

Wow, I like your perception of my poem!
Thank you for taking the time to review my writing an.. read more
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Matured decision written with good clarity. have a nice day. good writing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mads

3 Months Ago

I´m so sorry for not replying any sooner!
Thank you for the nice Review!
This piece makes a great point. Friendships do ebb and flow and if the are the real kind, eventually we find each other again and many times the second time or third time around is even better. Nice writing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mads

3 Months Ago

tysm for this awesome review!
Im sorry for the late reply but I hope you had and will have a.. read more

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