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A Poem by Bradley
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I had a rough day.

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I can't sit to stand
I lie down upright
Standing knees above shoulders
Walking one way moving the other

I can't speak to think
I talk with my mouth shut
Throat at the top of my toes
Deafened by nothing ever heard

© 2013 Bradley


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Bradley
This is how I felt. It just came out this way, no revisions, first draft.

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"I lie down upright" I think you mean lay, but you might be playing with words.
"Deafened by nothing ever heard" Great ending line! I completely understand what you mean here. Worried about things that have yet to happen, that anxious feeling.
Great work again, some of your metaphors are unclear but that might just be me because I'm really bad with them. Haha great job. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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