Cosmic

Cosmic

A Poem by t.m.

You carry the weight 

of the world,

still every day,

you wake.

You spend your time

trying to change

the fate's design,

even if you don't mean to.

I watch, sometimes, and

when the sun shines right,

I see the universe

in your eyes.

I could count the stars

if you'd let me close enough.

I wish all of those planets,

all of those wishes

flying through the sky,

could show you

what I see.

© 2016 t.m.


Author's Note

t.m.
sorry it sucks

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another pretty little poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

t.m.

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
on the contrary, this is the most wonderful piece of poetry that I have had the privilege to read in a while.I hope you shared it with the person who inspired.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

t.m.

8 Years Ago

Thank you! I haven't yet had the chance, but maybe someday.
This is a great poem. It doesn't suck. It can be hard to let people get close.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

t.m.

8 Years Ago

Thank you! I agree; it can be very difficult to let people get close. Especially when you're aware t.. read more
this is a really beautiful write in the way that it is wistful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Corset

8 Years Ago

I think mine has been sledgehammered to death, but we keep plugging :)
t.m.

8 Years Ago

True that :)
Corset

8 Years Ago

yes indeed :)

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Added on February 27, 2016
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