Still Here

Still Here

A Poem by TheOther

I just dropped by to say I love you.
That the walls you've build around you
were never good enough to hide you.
I see you, as you are.

I assure you I'm perfectly fine, but I lied.

I miss you more every second that passes

and it's tearing my heart apart to have to walk away,

to live another blank day, without you.


Everything's changing,

days turn to nights as the world spins around,

but I'm still here.

Right here, like I'll always be.


A silent guardian to you,

just to hear your heartbeat.
Sacred is the thought of you

and I am yours, forever.


Now I'm done, I've said it all.

I know you hate too much words.

It's getting late and I should leave,

but love's what kept me here all along...

© 2010 TheOther

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You definitely know how to drag the reader through your pieces, and this one I think is one of your best.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wow, so intense and haunting. Creative too. I agree with Sammie Rain too. All of what she said is true. Just an amazing peice of writing. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

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. ah, stunning ... the intensity and the flow of thoughts and words is absolutely ravishing ... it's a treat to read your words ... food for the soul ...

Posted 9 Years Ago

You have an amazing gift. Your pieces have the best opening lines. You know just how to get the reader to read the whole poem. Amazing read.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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there's are ambiguity about this, like that's a spiritual guide or lover not sure which..which I might add makes it all the more interesting..loved it.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

selfless adoration expressed with a tender rueful sigh~ beautiful write~

Posted 9 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful poem. Well written, a couple of small hiccups but nothing major. Great read. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on August 24, 2010
Last Updated on August 30, 2010



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