Dear Reader Do Not Read This

Dear Reader Do Not Read This

A Poem by TheOther

It is demeaning to the experiance itself
to be expressed with the mere means of words.
So why do you want a poem?
Why am I writing this poem?

Guilt and doubt troubles my mind.
Would you like to share?
I do not think so.
All you do is read, you do not feel.

You do not seem to get it.
So I forgive you for reading this.
I forgive you so I can forgive myself
for writing it.

© 2010 TheOther


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I have to say it's a very smart poem. Though I have to say that sometimes the words we read, speak louder than anything. Poems aren't just words, they're feelings and we too feel them. It's very beautifully written and sadness is lingering in each line. Great job and sorry for reading lol xD

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very good articulation of your point. One thing though, "writing". Beyond that, its powerful and unfortunately, all too true from the perspective that as empathetic as the reader may feel to any poems subject, the reader will NEVER actually know how the writer feels.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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mere words ...no..strength of purpose..yes...sorry I read it..no..

Posted 8 Years Ago


truly an intelligent poetic with deep thought poured throughout~ words lose their contours and depth when pressed against the silent heart~

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have to say it's a very smart poem. Though I have to say that sometimes the words we read, speak louder than anything. Poems aren't just words, they're feelings and we too feel them. It's very beautifully written and sadness is lingering in each line. Great job and sorry for reading lol xD

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank You for forgiving me. Good Write.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on October 31, 2010
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TheOther
TheOther

Nicosia, Cyprus



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I'm Christina Christodoulou at the age of 17. My native language is Greek and I live in Cyprus. Awards: Red Instinct Award (5th) Aug 13, 2010 * The Thanatos Award Contest * Beneath.. more..

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