The Missing Heart

The Missing Heart

A Poem by SmileBig :)

I look around 
Another heart i have found
Foot steps treading
Onto a broken ground
As the footsteps become clearer 
I begin to hear her
She whispers through the air
Lord, you are no longer my healer
She trudges closer dragging feet along
Shes a little bit more then just a little lost 
I hear the splashes of the water
She screams "Now I am gone
Now I am gone
I run in her direction towards the sea
I scream "Oh God please don't let this be
She's no where to be found
And I fall onto my knees
"Please fix this broken heart
Give her another start
She can fix what she's messed up
Please fix her broken heart." 
I draw the cross in the sand
Dig my feet into the land
Stare out into the midnight sky
And then I stand
I hear a sound off in the distance
I stop and quiet, give her screams a listen
I run to her side
And find the broken heart that's been missing
I drag her to the land again
Make her breathe out and in
Please stay here
That's where you should have been

© 2012 SmileBig :)


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i enjoyed this alot, it was very well written and emotions leave an impact for the reader, nice work

Posted 7 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

7 Years Ago

Thank u very much :)
You are such a sweet writer!I find your poems,like this one, heartwarming .Good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

8 Years Ago

Thank you :D
What a fantastic poem! It was fluid, fresh, and extremely well-written! I loved how you told a story in a poetic format. That was a very interesting thing to do. Poetry is a fantastic thing. It can be manipulated in so many dirrerent ways and sound incredible, as you have so nicely demonstated in this magnificent poem. Great job, nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

8 Years Ago

Thank you Soo much! :D
writingcrazy55555

8 Years Ago

You're welcome! It was a great poem! :)
well done! the story flowed well in the poem. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
very beautifully written. i think you could break it into stanzas so that it read easier, but of course its fine as it is, free verse poem are some of the best in my book. i like the loose rhyme scheme. it tells a story very well also, great work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I like it:) It's an interesting story for sure and I love the way you changed to boldness/font(?) of some of the words so that I could get a really good feel for what is what^_^ Great poem!
~Dreamer

Posted 8 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much :)
Missy, this is really beautifully written! Sometimes this is how I feel. That someone out there is picking up the pieces to my heart and will one day bring them back to me. Wouldn't that be great? xD This bitter cold world is filled with shattered hearts though. It's so sad and depressing :( I like how you call out to God for his help! That always help, it does for me anyway. This is one of your best work, I must say. Keep up the good work. :)

Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much! And yes, that would just be so nice. Calling out to god helps me a lot, cause he alw.. read more
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

8 Years Ago

You're welcome! :) Yes, he's a major role model for me in my everyday life challenges no matter what.. read more
the font changes on this really bring out certain words that might not have been before. the emotion is clear even within the stops and starts. i think its great :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much! :)
It's kinda cool.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

8 Years Ago

Thanks
I'm new, but I'm glad this is the first poem that I read. It's really well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

8 Years Ago

Well then welcome! And thank you very much :)

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