Be My Valentine?

Be My Valentine?

A Poem by SmileBig :)

Will you,
Will you be my valentine?
Will you,
Will you be mine?
If I take your heart,
Will you take mine too?
I don't want chocolate as a gift,
Because all I want is you.
I want a romance
A sweet relationship of two
I want a lover
And what I want is you,
My love, my sweet,
My heart and a half
You're all I ever wanted
You're all I'll ever have

© 2013 SmileBig :)


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Beautiful poem. I really liked it and the repitition of the few words makes it more cooler.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very beautifuly written peice :) Well done! and amazing write :3

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was 'special'to me...why? TMI... but I'ld have said yes if it was my Lady asking.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I want a lover
And what I want is you.
Wonderful

Posted 11 Years Ago


love the repitition. romance really isn't my cup of tea, but the earnesty and genuine, if a little generic, feelings are sweet, and the ending is enough to make a girl smile... big :) nice Valentine's piece

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm a fan of the repetition you used in this piece. It can make it come across as somewhat sing-song, but to me, this piece does read much more like lyrics than a regular old poem, to be honest. It's a little generic, I won't lie, but the way you presented it was very pleasing to the eye, and it's nice to get that honesty and somewhat animal force of emotion which you showed in some of the lines of this poem. Very well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Thanks
*Standing Ovation* Great valentines day poem :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Haha thanks :)

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Added on February 13, 2013
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