Surrender

Silence speaks louder than words.............Lets surrender to the supreme.. Poems: • Surrender • So what if I can’t speak • Accidental surrender • Where I was wrong

Surrender

 

Closing eye for a feel,

Where expression ends,

World slows down at once,

Stagnant silence, no trends.

 

A smile conquers action,

No complaint occurs,

Every second counts,

Only human, no stalkers.

 

Time slows in motion,

Brain flies instantly,

Body refuses to act,

Plans convert madly.

 

The power of thoughts,

Exceeds the flesh,

A journey is about to start,

Energetic and fresh.

 

A melancholy sound disperse,

Recognizing end is near,

Noise wobbles in nature,

Atmosphere drops in fear.

 

An attire is surrounded,

At the wits of supreme,

The nucleus is off,

No music can now stream.

 

Eyes close due to pressure,

Surrender is complete,

Smiles stubbornly stays,

As no one is there to compete.

 

 

So what If I can’t speak

 

I can’t speak a word,

But I can express,

I can’t eradicate your sorrows,

But I can reduce your distress.

 

Just a touch of my eye,

Will make you smile,

Just a touch of thy,

Will make you agile.

 

I will dissolve your worries,

In my sea of thoughts,

Silently, I will hug you,

Presenting world lacking draughts.

 

I can’t speak so what,

We can chat and tweet,

I will listen to your every word,

Turning your bitter experiences sweet.

 

My smile will assure you best friend,

Silent, but crowded with expressions,

Providing a place to shed your tears,

My heart will rejuvenate your emotions.

 

I will hold you throughout crest and troughs

Together we will capture the peak,

Every emotion we will live till death,

So what, if I can’t speak.

 

 

 

Accidental surrender

 

Air struck my body,

Leaving an impact,

A drop passed by,

Forgetting to make a contact.

 

A touch screamed in low,

Creating a chaotic mind,

Sun was at his best,

Still something driving me blind.

 

The darkness was hugging my light,

Time was handicapped by speed,

So precisely, was there my presence,

But someone’s crying indeed.

 

Clueless mind was stumped,

Heart pumping was loud and clear,

Oh my Lord, I was motionless,

Eyes forgotten to shed a tear.

 

Everyone was muddling around,

Senseless senses were at best,

Work burden finally crested,

First time creating a rest.

 

Doctors failed their battle,

No savior can now rise,

Loan payments are immaterial,

I am overpowering world of price.

 

Experience envisioned a synopsis,

No more dates from the calendar 

communication is over and out,

THY soul…..I finally surrender

 

 

Where I was wrong

 

Still in a confusion between truth and lie,

Where I lost direction looking upon sky,

Tried to collect every gud rhythm and song,

But don’t know where I went wrong.

 

Do I was wrong when I accepted your friend request,

Or I was wrong when I started talking to you abreast,

Every second I was there through out so long,

Still I can’t figure out where I went wrong.

 

Does the belief I have in you was bleak,

Does that trust and faith in you, you buried somewhere deep,

Every moment was so energetic and so strong,

Then why it broke, where I went wrong.

 

Does the freedom I gave you was questionable,

Does “No counter questioning” was inexplicable,

Not believing the environment against you cost me this,

Everything was just right, then where It went wrong.

 

Does that care what I did wasn’t enough,

Does that tone of our conversation was so rough,

We spent days and nights together with love and share,

Then why now there nothing is to share

We were moving together singing same song,

Then Tell me where I went wrong …….

 

Does that freedom lost its importance,

Does that understanding was only for that instant,

I was so much concerned for you, was that my fault,

Where I went wrong for bagging this assault.

 

And now I am still the same no changes,

No pain, no tears , No bandages,

But still mind is in same conspiracies throng

Where I was wrong?

Author's Note

An emotion...which is best....unsaid.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"And now I am still the same no changes,
No pain, no tears , No bandages,
But still mind is in same conspiracies throng
Where I was wrong?"
A old song from the past. "Freedom is when we have nothing to lose." People with great responsibility find joy in the joy and happiness they can create. This story is very good. With artwork would be a amazing book. Thank you for sharing you powerful words and thoughts.
Coyote