Numbers and We

Numbers and We

A Poem by Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
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This poem is inspired by........ Courtney Shay's poem titled.......TEN.......

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One is our soul

Entangled in love and care,

Two are our noses,

Smelling scent of our share

 

Three are our goals,

One mine, one your and one ours

Four are our eyes,

Our true love’s recourse.

 

Five is for our senses,

Capturing our beautiful memories,

Sixth is a magical sense,

Capturing your superlative blushes.

 

Seven are the wonders in world,

Which turns null & void against your grace,

Eight become our 4 fingers,

When we join them to win any race..

 

Nine  are the planets in solar system,

Which consist of only you,

Ten is the British melodic rock,

On which we will dance all through.

© 2012 Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"


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Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
This poem is inspired by........ Courtney Shay's poem titled.......TEN...........

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Numbers and you, perfect.
Each thought related with each number is beautiful. The goals, the melodic rock, 8 fingers..all so creative and thought out.
Very well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very nice use of numbers and thoughts. I like them all. Music is the key to life. Songs can I.D moments bringing sweet memories back to life. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is totally brilliant and creative! Such an amazing piece...Great work!
:)))

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well you captured my attention ! Well done ! I do fancy the line two are our noses smelling the scent of our share .....Beautiful !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a fun way to incorporate numbers and poetry. It was also deep. I really like the structure of this poem too. You follow certain rules for each stanza, and that is good with specific writes like these. Thanks :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw this is so sweet and wonderful,
So nicely written and expressed.
Amazing write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aaawww.... this was such a sweet write!!!

**Three are our goals,
One mine, one your and one ours
Four are our eyes,
Our true love’s recourse**

luv that right there.... speaks so loud to me!!!
**tips my lyrical wand to you.... GREAT JOB!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nyc..but three are (our)out goals,and six is(are)or sixth seems better:)..gud luck

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love it wow amazing

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Added on April 18, 2012
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Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"

Delhi, Delhi, India



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