Twist in the tale

this is a love turned comedy poem...................enjoy it

People say loving you is a crime,

My eyes cried listening to this brutal rhyme,

because you are dearest to me every time,

I died 1000 times listening sour words like lime.

 

Watching your eyes is like watching a heart touching accident,

your every single tear makes me restless 100 percent,

But these people doesn’t understood what I meant,

& I am sure one day they will definitely repent.

 

I can’t even think of leaving you,

Already cried so many times and tears are still due,

I told them love doesn’t see cast barrier & it’s a clue,

But they beat you because of our love and its true.

 

You came back again for me and my heart again cried,

Watching your scars you don’t know haw many times I died,

just to be with u several times I lied,

so now how to live without you, someone has to guide.

 

Is it my fault that you are a monkey,

Can't I love a creature even if it is a donkey,

I just love you cause you are more pranky.

 

When u dance from one branch to another,

I open my arms as a player open for a ball to gather,

Cant we enjoy the life being together,

But these people say please don’t be with monkey forever.

 

In the end They say you might jump & disappear soon,

How will they climb trees because its like reaching the moon,

They said better love a donkey because he can be found in noon,

At one more thought they said better love a famous cartoon.

Author's Note

just enjoy the change .... have fun....lolzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Ha ha, this is hilarious. I love it. Quite a carefree, thoughtful and lovely piece. I love how towards the end, you turned it to a twist. ha ha...
everyone is free to love anyone! But as humans.. lol...
This made me smile. Thank you. A delightful read for sure!! =)

[Suditi]

Hehehehehehe :D
Now thats a love poem! :P
AWESOME!! :D

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Haha, yess really funny! it begins like real romantic love poem but then become ...little bizzar! everyone however is free to love anyone..but just at least of his own kind :) I felt happy to read this poem! thank u...
~nia~

[Chesney W.]

truly excellent write!.. an enjoyable read!!

[Thea]

This was totally fun to read! The rhyme scheme was greatly crafted each line and message was absolutely entertaining...Well done!
:)))

[CourtneyShay]

i love it huni

[just is]

This is so wonderful and quirky, I enjoyed this write.
Amazing write here.