Changing weathers

Wish...my wife will also feel the same whenever I will get married :-)

 

A sweet morning rang my ears,

Icy wind stuttering my arms,

So winded up in warmth of love,

My dreams trepidating with alarms.

 

The drops of rain was shimmering my soul,

Stirring the deepest sin of compassion,

I was waiting for a touch,

To instigate the flight of passion

 

Suddenly the sun boogied to woes,

Cramping the cloudy envious via rain,

My senses drew a rainbow,

 Colors were cluttered together like rain.

 

The sun rays scattered the clouds of love,

But wind was equipped to skim off the light house,

My soul waited for the magic,

When the wind whispered for autumn to arouse.

 

Trees started dancing in colossal ethos of thrill,

Soul was divined in purity of saintliness,

Sunken in dignity of relief,

Atmosphere begin to enchant breathless

 

Suddenly my cheeks felt bliss,

When you kissed them slowly,

My dream became a reality,

Filled with love, so sacred and holy.

 

These moments are like changing weathers in my life,

I am so lucky to be such charismatic husband’s wife.

 

Author's Note

I Wish.......my wife will also feel the same whenever I will get married :-).............

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

so sweet and romantic! even the end was surprising for me...Its very high as expressions and so original words used! It provoke deep feeling of awakening and pleasure from the start of new day..and I really liked how it ends..with gentleness..I wish I`m this wife here! really wonderful!
~nia~

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is so romantic and sensitive.. Your imagery is awesome!
Thanks for sharing.. Keep it up! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Changes are many in a life. Good to have someone willing to change and be able to flow like the wind. Nice story and a very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[SilentNiaAngel]

So sweet ... I really hope u fine the perfect wife!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Beautiful, loving piece. Enjoyed this write.

[Thea]

This is such a piece! It came from one's really loving heart! And I guess she will! This was a beautiful poem...Great work!
:)))

[Cassie Fraga]

oooohhh the word play is breath taking.... very special write!!! and yes she will indeed!!! thank you for sharing such grand emotion!! love it!!!

[Renée]

Aww She will..as long as you reminder why... ( ; great writing

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Wow! this was so beautiful in imagery and feeling!

[KAREN]

Beautiful imagery, heartfelt write!