A Glimpse of you – 2

"When eye meets eye"

An anxiety for a freedom,

A frivolous mind gets the work.

An exotic beauty glares in eye,

An impish heart gets the jerk.

 

A charismatic change in air,

Turning water into a wine,

O lord! Her eyes were tranquil,

Want to spend eternity sitting inside.

 

 

Just a second plug energy,

Leave us mesmerizing for hours,

A feel resurrecting in heart,

Leaving us excited even in showers.

 

A slant towards life,

Igniting zeal, enthusiasm and spirit,

Every moment engenders smile,

No tears, no pain, no culprit.

 

Every second dances without music,

Thoughts bewildered in merry,

Her garb were so warm,

I was enticed in confusion of cherry

  

Is this a reality or fun,

Every moment souvenir touchy showers,

Just a glimpse of you,

Instils unknown mesmeric powers.

 

This is a world of my thoughts,

Viciously circulating with time,

Every second is an era,

Of, romanticism, love, values and rhyme.

Author's Note

A glimpse of you - 2 ..................... a magic of eyes entering to heart :-)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Every second dances without music,
Thoughts bewildered in merry,
Her garb were so warm,
I was enticed in confusion of cherry"
Your poetry is alive and strong. Each set of lines adding to a beautiful place and good emotion. A perfect ending for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Renée]

Dude your very talented ! Another spectacular Poem !

[Cathy Wattam]

This is a lovely expressive, romantic poem with some great lines. I especially love the final stanza. Just one small issue for me - "Her garb were so warm," is a little incongruous but otherwise, beautiful poem.

[may]

Absolutely wonderful ! Totally loved it ! :)

[Blindfolded]

A very beautiful and romantic read. You're an excellent writer.

[Thea]

Wow...This was really beautiful...The emotions were expressed very well in each line...I love it...Great work!
:)))

[Manpreet]

This is romantic and fresh "Is this a reality or fun,

Every moment souvenir touchy showers,

Just a glimpse of you,

Instils unknown mesmeric powers.



This is a world of my thoughts,

Viciously circulating with time,

Every second is an era,

Of, romanticism, love, values and rhyme." I simply enjoyed these lines!

[jessdixon]

"A charismatic change in air,
Turning water into a wine,
O lord! Her eyes were tranquil,
Want to spend eternity sitting inside."

I love those lines. Your words are poetic and the message is vivid. Beautiful!

[Suditi]

It is so beautiful!
Almost like a song.
The choice of words, the flow, all so amazing. :D

[Cassie Fraga]

awe struck.... you render me awe struck mistah!!!
WOW... the more I read you the more I want... yea you are that good!!!
hurry go... go write another one!!! hahahahahahaa!!
**tips my lyrical wand to you**

[ChaoticSoul]

Wonderful word choices. This poem is so lively, and all the emotions shine through just beautifully. Really great writing.