"The last Hope"

The last Hope

 

Equality brutalized insanely,

Humanity is at the edge of disparity,

Unsung battle at the verge,

As if decoying mist in heed of clarity,

Comatose failures died insane,

Synchronizing colossal tears in smile,

Still a hope revives from death
deeming a lame to be agile.

 

Humanely existence bleeds treachery

Dissecting emotion in name of parity,

I am weary of this combat
Thy soul, free me from self in-veracity.

 

A master slash harmony,
Skirmishing against irrational style,

Lost in aiding disgrace,
Yet practicing it to gain the pride

 

Tantalizing death, annoying life,

Misunderstood phoenix as craven,

Yet standing tall with pride,

As if renewed hell into heaven

 

Who will revive the phoenix,

The battle of battle is on,

Death has quenched life,

The solitary beam is also gone.  

Author's Note

the last hope died.........

Reviews

[Leigh]

the last stand of anything is a pivotal moment, who will stand with me to the end and carry on the fight. I like the subject of this poem, we must believe in life without end

[may]

Toooo good ! Just awesome ! :D

[Thea]

When there's still life, there's still hope...We should never give up...I love the concept and idea of this poem...A powerful poem.
:)))

[Manpreet]

Tantalizing death, annoying life,

Misunderstood phoenix as craven,

Yet standing tall with pride,

As if renewed hell into heaven
Perfect lines to start a new thought for hope and aspirations!! Nice work!!

[Empirik]

I love the word play here. This is has a heavy weight upon it and sadness which is to be overcome. I feel it's serious nature.

[Coyote Poetry]

This is poetry. The powerful statements made the poem feel alive and strong.
"Comatose failures died insane,
Synchronizing colossal tears in smile,
Still a hope revives from death
deeming a lame to be agile."
I wanted to read more. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Belle]

A philosophical poem. Bravo!
A philosopher and a poet, it is no doubt that these
two are the most dissimilar creatures; it is beyond imaginable that you are these two! You are simply brilliant my friend.

Belle~

[reflectingus]

This is so well written! I loved the language, the usage of words, great descriptions and metaphors, greatly enjoyable to read. Brings a new hope into life, and optimism soars. Well done!

[Suditi]

Poignant.
The fifth stanza is my favorite.
Actually each stanza has a story to tell. All of them are amazing.
The theme in itself catches attention.
A very well written piece.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"Humanely existence bleeds treachery
Dissecting emotion in name of parity,
I am weary of this combat
Thy soul, free me from self in-veracity." To relinquish the inveracity within yourself is to renew and revive the hope.