HIS SONG

HIS SONG

A Poem by TheReal

I fell in love with a song he wrote...
I felt like he knew my life,
Like he felt my pain,
Appreciated my gain,
Like my joy was his,
Like we shared that struggle.

I fell in love with a song he wrote...
Like he wrote it for me,
Like I was his child,
Like he was my protection,
Like he tasted my sweet,
Like he loved me deep.

I fell in love with a song he wrote...
Like he cried my tears,
Like he faced my fears,
Like this world was ours,
Like we touched the stars,
Like we were the sun,
And we'd never burn out...
Like his lyrics kept going,
When the song was over,
Like that song I loved...

I fell in love with a song he wrote...
But every song ends.

© 2012 TheReal


Author's Note

TheReal
ANOTHER TOTALLY RANDOM PIECE. OFF THE TOP OF MY HEAD. WHAT DO YOU THINK?

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I really like this one, it shows the idea of love very well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love it. Songs are very easy to fall in love with and I love the repetition. Keep it up

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's so tidy! And clear and crisp. Good material. I like it very much. :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was really nice. I like how you repeated certain lines over again and I loved the ending. Wherever you got the inspiration for this, it feels real

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 18, 2012
Last Updated on May 18, 2012
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TheReal
TheReal

C, PA



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I write. I'm young. I'm a lyricist as you can probably tell. I want you to enjoy my words. more..

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A Poem by TheReal