Crashing.

Crashing.

A Poem by TheReal
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Ending to Beginning. Last to First.

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Send my buildings crashing.
Crashing to the ground.
Ground me in your presence.
Present is the sound.
Sound out all my letters.
Letter me to words.
Words fly out the window.
Window seals my nerves.
Nerves just hold me back.
Back down to a wall.
Walls are built between us.
Us we know it all.
All my bricks are falling.
Falling just like rain.
Rain on me like sunshine.
Sun relieved the pain.
Pain as I just crumble.
Crumble into dust.
Dust just sprinkles over.
Over into lust.
Lust me into love.
Love is just me falling.
Falling as I'm crashing.
Crashing is my calling.


Send my buildings crashing.
Crashing to the ground.
Ground me in your presence.
Present is the sound.

© 2012 TheReal


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TheReal
What do you think? Last word to first word in each line...

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Very cool, I loved how you took the word from the end and put it into the beginning of the next line.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this...it flows so well and I love the form. Brilliant. Great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reminded me of Gerard McMann, maybe it was the linking of the words and thoughts. But something felt dark, and cold.



Nice job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great job, I love it! I liked the format you used for your poem because it mixes things up. It's very descriptive which was great because I was able visualize everything that was going on.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutely love this poem! It flows so well, and I just...I just really like it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 27, 2012
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Tags: CRASHING, BEGINNING, ENDING, WORDS, MIMI, THE REAL, LOVE, BUILDINGS

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TheReal
TheReal

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