WHEN OUR LIPS TOUCH

WHEN OUR LIPS TOUCH

A Poem by TheReal
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Kisses are the key to the heart.

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Oh when our lips touch
I feel it in my center
I lose my sense of space and time
An absence then I enter
When you place your lips on mine
I feel it in my spine
The impossible comes alive
The dead inside me is revived
When we kiss I get a rise
I feel every "I love you"
I feel the tension in my toes
I need every part of you
Pure arousal in between
Like fire in a dragon
And when our lips aren't touching
Please believe I have to have them
Your request becomes my action
I become your slave
Cause once your lips are touching mine
Oh boy, I can't behave.

© 2012 TheReal


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TheReal
Another one of those random things I wrote. What do you think?

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"Oh boy, I can't behave."

In my opinion, that was the best part of the poem. It really brought the entire piece together. The whole thing was a burst of passion simmering down to that one line, which insinuates so much through so little. You have an absolutely awesome talent for writing lyrics and poetry. You are able to convey so much into so few lines. With some of us, it takes more or less depending.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Passionate... such emotion it brings everything colliding together, I loved how you made it seem as if everything rhymed in some places because it flows very well;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh wow, this was beautiful. I enjoyed the passion in this. Great write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Pax
sexy and adventurous.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Oh boy, I can't behave."

In my opinion, that was the best part of the poem. It really brought the entire piece together. The whole thing was a burst of passion simmering down to that one line, which insinuates so much through so little. You have an absolutely awesome talent for writing lyrics and poetry. You are able to convey so much into so few lines. With some of us, it takes more or less depending.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aside from minor correction in breaks, this does sing like a song a little rough and warm.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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