Finding My Way

Finding My Way

A Poem by The Uncommon Muse

Arising from the ashes,
soaring towards the sky
Her past left to burn,
No tears left to cry.

 

She searches for him,
amid the glittering stars
the one who guided her,
who loved her from afar.

 

He watches her climb
his arms opening wide,
lighting the path for her, 
calling her to his side.

 

Into his embrace she flies,
the fire and the light combine
a sight for the gods
as two celestial beings entwine.

 

She is his phoenix
he is her guiding light
together forever
clasped always in flight.

© 2011 The Uncommon Muse


Author's Note

The Uncommon Muse
It's a work in progress...the meter seems off, and some places jsut doesnt flow like I want, but its an attempt to get the bare bones down of what i want to say...feel free to comment

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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem...Have a great one...:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


The Uncommon Muse

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review Sami...I truly appreciate your lovely words
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)..........
like how it caopmes toghrtheer great job well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is very sweet. it gives me pictures of sparkling vistas and constellation. very nice poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Romantic and inspiring. And very lovely. I loved reading this. It made me smile and sigh softly. Just beautiful. Great work.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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The Uncommon Muse
The Uncommon Muse

Tallahassee, FL



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I'm a writer focusing on erotica, fiction and poetry. I love creating characters and breathing life into them. I rarely write poetry just to write poetry. My poetry is intensely personal and is wri.. more..

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