The Unforgivin

The Unforgivin

A Poem by TheUnforgivinFallenAngel

I have always remembered you

You never seem to suprise

Everything you do doesnt make since

Understanding you is something I will never be able to do


Hearing your voice hurts me

Wanting to understand the pain

Is like wanting to understand life


Hurting you is impossible to do

No matter how bad I am hurt myself

I cannot inflict the pain

For the pain shall stay within me


No one shall ever estimate me

No matter how understood I am

I shall always be unforgivable


I shall never be understood

For now I am hurt

If she is to ever to face me

I will burst back into tears


Now I am forever scared

For she has hurt me

She has burned the pain into my heart

For now I am forever the Unforgivin

© 2011 TheUnforgivinFallenAngel

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You have a gift for writing such dark pieces of literary art. This is amazing! Such beautiful pain in this poem. It just engulfs me completely. The emotion is so raw and obviously tampered with last time. This is really well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago

this is what i call a poetry ............ unblemish , good flow

Posted 8 Years Ago

I love the raw emotion,
your very good at this.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I like this. Such raw emotion. So beautiful. Very great read.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Everything you do doesnt make since: doesn't-sense.

My favorite is the third stanza, i can feel the pain in this poem. great write! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

this is good child. keep it going

Posted 8 Years Ago

intense man...

Posted 8 Years Ago

You should DreamDeamon

Posted 8 Years Ago

I loved this...

Posted 8 Years Ago

do i know who this is about??

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on April 15, 2011
Last Updated on April 15, 2011