The Unforgivin

I have always remembered you

You never seem to suprise

Everything you do doesnt make since

Understanding you is something I will never be able to do

 

Hearing your voice hurts me

Wanting to understand the pain

Is like wanting to understand life

 

Hurting you is impossible to do

No matter how bad I am hurt myself

I cannot inflict the pain

For the pain shall stay within me

 

No one shall ever estimate me

No matter how understood I am

I shall always be unforgivable

 

I shall never be understood

For now I am hurt

If she is to ever to face me

I will burst back into tears

 

Now I am forever scared

For she has hurt me

She has burned the pain into my heart

For now I am forever the Unforgivin

Reviews

[Katannaism]

You have a gift for writing such dark pieces of literary art. This is amazing! Such beautiful pain in this poem. It just engulfs me completely. The emotion is so raw and obviously tampered with last time. This is really well written.

[nishantshah2381]

this is what i call a poetry ............ unblemish , good flow

[DearSweetAgony]

I love the raw emotion,
your very good at this.

[A.E. Surdam]

I like this. Such raw emotion. So beautiful. Very great read.

[Daydreamer54]

Everything you do doesnt make since: doesn't-sense.

My favorite is the third stanza, i can feel the pain in this poem. great write! :)

[wolf68]

this is good child. keep it going

[Murisaka]

intense man...

[TheUnforgivinFallenAnge..]

You should DreamDeamon

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

I loved this...

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

do i know who this is about??