Lost

Lost

Lost Here

Lost Here Without

Lost Here Without Knowing

Lost Here Without Knowing Love

 

Forgotten

Forgotten All

Forgotten All Love

Forgotten All Love Within

Forgotten All Love Within Me

 

Unloved

Unloved Now

Unloved Now Without

Unloved Now Without Feeling

Unloved Now Without Feeling You

 

Without

Without You

Without You Now

Without You Now Feeling

Without You Now Feeling Depressed

 

You Were Always There

Now You are not

Destroying All of my Sanity

You have destroyed my Heart

 

Within the Darkness I lay

Without the love I once Felt

I am Destroyed and lost

With no light to Follow

 

I am Lost

Reviews

[NickyGL]

nice work. Its sad, and emotional. I wish that upon NO one, its a truly hard thing.

[Katannaism]

Very interesting write. Quite a quirky start to the 4th stanza. Its also quite melancholic and sad... The darkness just engulfed me. Good job!

[nishantshah2381]

artistic....... intersting read

[☯]

Very very artistic beginning. That's what I loved most about this poem. I also like how you emphasized the title, into the poem deeply. Very nice job :)

[A.E. Surdam]

Wow, very creative. I like this a lot. It burns within the mind and makes you think of the true meaning behind the glass. So very emotional. Very nice.

[Sylo's Rose]

Very repeative

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

Oh, bro. that makes me sad. but i still love the poem i like how you made it go. Nice floow.

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

I could relate to this. If you ever need or want to talk, you can always talk to me :)