Without You

Without You

A Poem by TheUnforgivinFallenAngel

If Only She knew how I felt


Here Without You

I stand Alone

In the Darkness

Bleeding out Onto the Cold Floor


With Every Drop of Blood

The Pain Goes Away

With Every Slice on my Wrist

I feel The Happyness


The Memory Of You

Is on the top of my mind

Hoping The Blood With Wash it Away


Every Cut I count

Ever Pain I feel

Every Tear I shed


I shall be here Without You

© 2011 TheUnforgivinFallenAngel

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Such a sad and dark write! But exceptionally beautiful nonetheless. Very exquisite emotion and strong words. Great write!

Posted 8 Years Ago

This was so sad and so beautiful, I loved it. Amazing job.

Posted 8 Years Ago

dark write,
but well written....

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Dark and forgiving :) Nice write.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I like it. It is very good. It expresses the pain from the heart.

Posted 8 Years Ago

It reminds me of Breaking Benjamins :Without You.
I Love It Great Job!
(like always)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Nice. very depressive. like Sylo

Posted 8 Years Ago

So much emotion. And again im assuming i know who your talking about, dont I lil bro... haha little..

Posted 8 Years Ago

Full of closed emotion and classic ability, a well penned, bright flowing piece, good read, well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww. :( This is really sad. But I loved this poem. You are a really talented poet. I hope everything works out for you. Wonderful write! 100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on April 18, 2011
Last Updated on April 18, 2011