Without You

If Only She knew how I felt

Here Without You

I stand Alone

In the Darkness

Bleeding out Onto the Cold Floor

 

With Every Drop of Blood

The Pain Goes Away

With Every Slice on my Wrist

I feel The Happyness

 

The Memory Of You

Is on the top of my mind

Hoping The Blood With Wash it Away

 

Every Cut I count

Ever Pain I feel

Every Tear I shed

 

I shall be here Without You

Reviews

[Katannaism]

Such a sad and dark write! But exceptionally beautiful nonetheless. Very exquisite emotion and strong words. Great write!

[Tasha]

This was so sad and so beautiful, I loved it. Amazing job.

[roy mccarthy]

dark write,
but well written....

[☯]

Dark and forgiving :) Nice write.

[A.E. Surdam]

I like it. It is very good. It expresses the pain from the heart.

[DearSweetAgony]

It reminds me of Breaking Benjamins :Without You.
I Love It Great Job!
(like always)

[Sylo's Rose]

Nice. very depressive. like Sylo

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

So much emotion. And again im assuming i know who your talking about, dont I lil bro... haha little..

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Full of closed emotion and classic ability, a well penned, bright flowing piece, good read, well done.

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

Aww. :( This is really sad. But I loved this poem. You are a really talented poet. I hope everything works out for you. Wonderful write! 100/100