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A Poem by TheUnforgivinFallenAngel

Where’d you go?
I’ve waited so
Long to see your face.
Where’s this place
That you’re at?
Many days I’ve sat
And waited.
I haven’t dated
Since you left me.
Can’t you see?

Me heart and I
Cry and cry
Till you say,
“This is the day
You’ll never forget
Or regret
I came back.”

© 2011 TheUnforgivinFallenAngel


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So sad and passionate. I feel the heart cry out so. So emotional. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Emotional and full of heartbroken longing. I thought the middle of the poem seemed a little forced and less poetic, but the beginning and end were strong.

Posted 8 Years Ago


The longing is so plain to see in this poem, really really nice. Something I can even relate to myself.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i mean strong emotion.i like it a lot.

Posted 8 Years Ago


tion.i like it a lot.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thank you =D

Posted 8 Years Ago


great poem, you are very talented with words for sure ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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