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Let my fly

Let my fly

A Poem by TheUnforgivinFallenAngel

How can I always lend a hand
But ignore the cries within myself
It brings me joy to bring you a smile
But my emptiness still sits up on the shelf

Inside my heart will always bleed
But I will never let it be shown on my face
Only the tear that falls down my cheek
Will give you a glimpse, a shadow, a trace

I suffocate when I try to breathe
The chains you gave won't let my body go
I have dreams, and needs, and wants
My body is numb, I think maybe you should know

I struggle with my demons each day
You feed them while you slowly watch me die
Please let me be and please set me free
I want to smile as I look up at the sky

I want the moon to brighten the night
I want the clouds to pass me on by
I want the stars to guide me to heaven
And I want wings to lift me up and let me fly

© 2011 TheUnforgivinFallenAngel

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I love it, very soothing style and flow, with beautifully intricate patterns of emotion :) Great work, well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

very well written..

Posted 11 Years Ago

This was wonderful in the image of taking and never giving back, robbing one of happiness and love in order to gain it. Love is not a game, it takes to to make it work, it is not fair for one to be happy while you are left there feeling so empty. great poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Of the taking and never giving back. Robbing the soul of all that is there but never replenishing the flow. Love is give and take or it is devastation. Well written

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is beautiful and I can deffinitly relate. A very well crafted, sincere, raw poem. Great write (:

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on May 20, 2011
Last Updated on May 20, 2011

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