My song

My song

A Poem by TheUnforgivinFallenAngel

As I sit here
Listening to the music
I slowly start to feel
The soft touch of your kiss

As the slowest part of the song
Smoothly settles in
I remember
Dancing with you under the stars

Suddenly the pace of the song pics up
At that moment my anger flares
I remember how you broke my heart

Finally the song comes to an end
My heart beat slowly stops
I remember that you took my heart
So now it is my time to die
For my song has ended

© 2011 TheUnforgivinFallenAngel


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Awww! Sooo cute! As I imagined this, I seriously felt butterflies! :D Loved this poem! Keep up the good work! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


this was amazing. i loved sitting here almost hearing the music as i read the poem. It was awesome bc i am a music FREAK. Relates to different poems of mine i wrote a WHILE back. Guess it just really spoke to me.


Posted 12 Years Ago


Loved it :) I would love to see you write a more upbeat poem, because I thnk it would be fantastic, and that it might prove helpful not to dwell oermuch on death, but I love your work nonetheless. I have sons like this, and you have captured the truth behind those songs perfectly :) well done :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


very good! I too, have some songs that i do not care to listen for it brings back memories! Very well written!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very interesting, i love the story it tells....but it did make me sad :'( haha great job

Posted 12 Years Ago


pace not paste

Posted 12 Years Ago



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