My dream

My dream

A Poem by TheUnforgivinFallenAngel

As the sun sets
Over the mountains
I begin to dream
That one day
The world will be at peace
But I know
That day is far to come
So for now
My one and only dream
Is to see you smile

© 2011 TheUnforgivinFallenAngel


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Awe, so very sweet... and great. Nice and really good, i really like this. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I liked it. It was sweet an emotional wihout being too heavy, and really gve me a little lift :) Great work, well done :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was short but it was full of hope.

Posted 12 Years Ago


What a sweet poem--and lovely!

Posted 12 Years Ago


and what a lovely dream that is.......beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was short and full of meaning and hope. I dream for a better place too. I loved the ending. Wonderful write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 12 Years Ago



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