K-O'ed

K-O'ed

A Poem by Daisy Morgy
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When someone beats you down emotionally, you have to go for the Knock Out...

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K-O'ed

Slammed down
Into the ground
With a high kick
To the heart
Huh.
Try again
Im not fazed
Go on..
Tear me apart!

Brutality is your game
A fist without a face
An animal with no brain
Punch to the side
Bruise to the eye
In the end
Its your soul  
That will break!

You taunt me
Try to confuse me
You used me
And even now
You just cant stop
Like you need to abuse me
But what if i struck
What if i played the only card you cant.
Love.

Try to stand up after this blow
Buddy...
You've just been K-O'ed









© 2013 Daisy Morgy


Author's Note

Daisy Morgy
Another new one that i wrote, it nice to be writting again what with A-levels taking up my time :)

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Wow! This is very nicely written. The words just flow and you're a real winner with that weapon, dear. Always love. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your weapon is love!
Your opponent gets K-O'ed by the blow of love.
You are the winner!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this piece, full of positive energy and character, and the metaphors work so well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I admire the spirit this poem conveys; ' Never say die' !

A terrific rousing write, you are indeed an a worthy warrior and a good poet (ess) !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OMG! i loved this! i love your style of writting, its so different keep it up! i wanna read more

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 16, 2013
Last Updated on November 17, 2013
Tags: pain, fight, love, hurt, feeling, poetry, emotion

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Daisy Morgy
Daisy Morgy

Norwich, United Kingdom



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Hi :) My name is daisy, I'm now 19 years old but I started this profile when I was 15. Studying my second year of Animation at NUA 👌🏻 This has been a great way to watch my writing pr.. more..

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