Air like a Feather

Air like a Feather

A Poem by Daisy Morgy
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Just something that came to mind as i cant speak at the moment due to having bronchitus :) (i thin thats how you spell it :L)

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Air like a feather
Flows out from my lips.
Mocking and taunting
As it twirls and twists
Its almost angelic
Dancing through the room
But the silence lays as a reminder

That it can never be heard.

Dorment on my tongue
The words lay asleep
Writhing in aggitation
Begging for release
But no matter how many times
I desperetly try
 The words are left alone

 To silently cry
 







© 2013 Daisy Morgy


Author's Note

Daisy Morgy
I basically wrote this because its hard to not be able to talk at the minuite and i realy miss it.
Made me think of the people out there who cant be heard
Hope you enjoy it :)

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To have words floating around the mind and to not be able to voice them must be a terribly frustrating situation. I hope you are able to talk again soon and that whatever the cause of your silence, it is not permanent. This was well written. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisy Morgy

7 Years Ago

thank you!!! :) i sure hope i do soon haha



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The first half of the poem seems to convey frustration, while the latter gives a sense of heartbreaking desperation.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautifully written even when you can't talk. Also, lovely layout! Hope you are better. :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Loved this! The layout just looks right to the eye and the way you use the inability to speak as a metaphor for those without a voice is brilliant.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is excellently written Great work :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is just so lovely written. I vividly imagined everything you've written and the end felt so heartbreaking (and a little bit frustrating). It must be so hard to not be able to speak. Please get well soon. This is a wonderful write. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loveeee it, very good

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so interesting and really good! You got the emotions spot on! And I hope you get better soon! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well at least something positive has came about through being laid low with bronchitis! I hope you have gotten rid of it by the time you read this review!!

A piece of metaphoric magic about a nasty affliction !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm sure it is frustrating to want to speak and not be heard - I hope you feel better soon. Your poem is well written and a pleasure to read.

:) Julie

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 29, 2013
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Tags: air, talking, breathing, silence, illness, sad, poem, voice

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Daisy Morgy
Daisy Morgy

Norwich, United Kingdom



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Hi :) My name is daisy, I'm now 19 years old but I started this profile when I was 15. Studying my second year of Animation at NUA 👌🏻 This has been a great way to watch my writing pr.. more..

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