Over the veil

Something I randomly wrote.

I smile at you

And you grin at me

Ever so... lovingly

But you smile only to a few

What a joyful atmosphere

I make you laugh, you flip your hair

I smell the glee in the air

But you break it with your stares

Under the tree you smiled

For the first time in a long while

I cried this time and you consoled me

Underneath this big willow tree

The night falls but stay longer

We'll make the dusk a bit brighter

Even in this cold and dark weather

You and I will stay forever 

I wake up, out of breath

To realize my dream's death

But this fight isn't through

You are going to be mine Evolym-lou

Reviews

[written in blood]

very nicely written!! enjoyed it a lot!!

[EMMIE]

I love that last stanza. Very creative poem, interesting concept

[GlacialStars]

Oh thank you xD

[Carolann Dowsett]

Oh this is a delight, very beautifully written.

[GlacialStars]

Thank you! I appreciate it. And thanks for the friend request ^^

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[N!LoC]

evolym-lou.... must be a lucky girl :-)

[GlacialStars]

XD its not a real person though. Its backwards for my love ^^