Who is She?

Who is She?

A Poem by TheWritingWriter
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The line between what we know as real and fantasy can sometimes be blurred, but we can never ignore the way something makes us feel.

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I still dream of her face

The healthy locks that once draped like a curtain

Now have dissipated like a snowflake in an ocean

How extreme the disease of time�"


Her eyes�"her blue eyes were as crystals

Shining brighter than the sun

The once solid liquid now melting down her face

As the crystals wave goodbye


Her skin now bowing to the law of gravity

Growing closer to the dust of which she came

Oh! The laws of the universe�"

The good they assert, but how terrible the result


She touches my frontal with her fingertips

Though I see her touch, the sensation is absent

The comfort and security of her is limitless

Who is she?


The sun radiating beams of light as her backdrop

Stings my skin�"

The sun vanishes�"its opposite dangling in the sky

Cooler now 


She stares at me with the stars dangling above her

As holes punched in the black sky

What is beyond this hole-filled curtain? 

The home of others


She comforts me with something non-existent

But it does exist in her realm

The motherly and supernatural affection

It’s a puzzling concept


She looks at me with crystals�"and smiles

She vanishes before I blink

But the feeling I feel lingers

She is as the fog


I remain agnostic to her person

Though her existence is sure

I don’t know how and I don’t know why

But her absence absolute�"this wasn’t goodbye

© 2014 TheWritingWriter


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Very touching i loved how i was suckd in till the very end.
Great word choice ,beautiful.
-sheri

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B.J
Every word gripped me till the end of the story. Very well written and articulated.

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This is absolutely beautiful. Every choice of words, how it flows and the story/message behind it is fantastic. It's a masterpiece, really it is. :)

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Maybe her absences must be "see you".. =)

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If there is one song in the world that can reflect the emotions you convey, it would be this, remember before we ask who someone else is is we must ask https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PdLIerfXuZ4

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Added on September 25, 2014
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TheWritingWriter
TheWritingWriter

Northport, AL



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