Depression

Depression

A Poem by Brandon Bretsnyder

My most noticeable expression
I don’t know what it’s caused by
Maybe it’s because people lie
Could it be that nobody cares
Or is it from all of these cuts and tears
All of this depression makes me feel so blue
But there’s one person I can look up to
This person treats me with respect
When all I do is neglect
This person shows me love
When all I do is push and shove
This person is my Father
But I just feel like a bother
He deserves more
Than just a son whose attitude is poor
You deserved to be listened too
Everything that I am saying is true
I love you Dad
I know that in the past I’ve been bad
But I want to make it up to you
Anyway that you choose
You are the Yang to my Yin
The Coke to my Gin
Dad, I love you
Do you feel the same way too?

© 2015 Brandon Bretsnyder


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Wow, that is such a sad, but well written poem, and very touching. I wish the same could be said about my family. I wish we had that closeness. My mom and I always fight, and I'm not close with my stepfather or sister. I do some other family I'm close to though. But I'm tangenting off, as uaual. Very well written with a touching ending.

Stacey

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brandon Bretsnyder

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)



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This one is really good. I love it. It's deep. ^_^

Posted 4 Years Ago


I like the poem a lot.
"You are the Yang to my Yin
The Coke to my Gin
Dad, I love you
Do you feel the same way too?"
The above lines were very good. Life does teach us. We must appreciate the people who cared for us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Indeed this is sad but well written poetry. So much emotion, that's what gives poems their spark. Well done

Posted 5 Years Ago


Indeed this is sad but well written poetry. So much emotion, that's what gives poems their spark. Well done

Posted 5 Years Ago


Indeed this is sad but well written poetry. So much emotion, that's what gives poems their spark. Well done

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wow, that is such a sad, but well written poem, and very touching. I wish the same could be said about my family. I wish we had that closeness. My mom and I always fight, and I'm not close with my stepfather or sister. I do some other family I'm close to though. But I'm tangenting off, as uaual. Very well written with a touching ending.

Stacey

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brandon Bretsnyder

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
A sacred gift
A pleasant game
Player?
Play him not.
Hear him out.
So many good things to say!
A wonder child, a wonder gift

Sad to say;
I have to say it
The best thing I like for free
The Best THING I LOVE FOR FREE
The best THING I LOVE for free
The best thing I love for free is me!


A hahahhahaa poem!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Well said. Please share this with your father. Thankyou for being the first person in my contest. Hope you wrote it in real time. I can't really tell. Writing the typing to the beat. Did you comply? You write in real time? If not, it is still great. Have your tried Zoloft? It seems to help a lot of people. You can answer in private or not at all, of course. A wonder drug. If you need to talk, don't hesitate to call. Over and out, Gabe.

Posted 5 Years Ago


The Archangel Gabriel

5 Years Ago

I mean by "real time" that you write the poem or type it as you speak it. You do the work in real t.. read more
Brandon Bretsnyder

5 Years Ago

I did write this in real time, by the way. :)
The Archangel Gabriel

5 Years Ago

Okay, you did write this in real time. I used to explain this in my webare. Good. Then, you are i.. read more

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Brandon Bretsnyder
Brandon Bretsnyder

Newland, NC



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Well, I'm a 15 year old living with my Father. I've had some depression in my past and I take control of it by writing poems. Most of my poems will be depressing. So, if you're looking for something h.. more..

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