(Poisoned?) Apple

Take a bite, my love.
Would you have it any other way?
Bittersweet judgment
wrapped in hate
Stiched tightly together with butterfly
Smile at the pain, for it is forever.
Take my hand, my love.

Reviews

[Harmony Lee]

Reading this leaves me with a curiosity around what causes the speaker to claim that pain is forever and (perhaps related) their reasoning for intending to inject another with such pain.

[kashaw]

An apple a day is good for you so they say... I have gone right off apples now, I certainly won;'t be biting into your apple. Think it may be full of maggots, :) A few lines of great work, I can taste the poison in this piece, If you have time, please pop over and read some of my work x. K.

[Poeticpiers]

Shades of snow white
A single bite would be sufficient
to achieve your foul intent
I only hope shes wise
enough to seethrough your lies
and tell you where to go
Pretty girls arent always slow