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In the rain

In the rain

A Poem by Jessica
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Just a little something I was thinking about

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As I stand
While the rain falls down
Cold and harsh
Yet comforting somehow
I know the end is near
Even though
I still hold dear
To a relationship
Doomed to fail
Here I stand
As the rain falls down
Looking out
At the cold grey sky
And the blue grey lake
That has waves from
The harsh rain
It is comforting
But I feel the same

© 2016 Jessica


Author's Note

Jessica
Not great, but it's something

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You got skills. You could be stranger though. This wasn't very weird at all, definitely contemplative though.

Posted 4 Years Ago


A very melancholy piece, nicely written.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this piece. It's well worded and we'll written. I'm glad you've had something new. Poetry isn't always happy rainbows and sunshine. And good poetry has real emotion, like this.

Posted 5 Years Ago


t.m.

5 Years Ago

I'm sad but I don't want to be sad but I don't know how to stop it.
Jessica

5 Years Ago

Sadness happens and it's ok to be sad
t.m.

5 Years Ago

But I don't want to be sad.

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Added on April 21, 2016
Last Updated on April 21, 2016
Tags: Weird;contemplative

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