Reflection

A poem writing during my addicted days

 Reflection

Who am I and who are you

Someone tell me what to do

Should I be the one you see

Or should I be a reflection of me

I've lost myself, I did not care

Hidden behind my glossy stair

Never knowing which way to turn

My fragile world starts to burn

Crumbles, breaks and falls apart

I need to know where to start

Where to go from where I am

Become the Wolf and not the Lamb

Become the man I was meant to be

No longer a pale reflection of me

Author's Note

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Reviews

[poetic soul]

I've lost myself, I did not care
Hidden behind my glossy stair
Never knowing which way to turn
My fragile world starts to burn

hard hitting lines....nice!!!

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Greg Skura]

Like the way you question who am i and you? Nice poem! Thank You!

[just is]

Where to go from where I am
Become the Wolf and not the Lamb
Become the man I was meant to be
No longer a pale reflection of me

I love these lines right here, one amazing write, your words flow down tha page.

[shiloh jennings]

"Where to go from where I am Become the Wolf and not the Lamb Become the man I was meant to be No longer a pale reflection of me"

Oooh! I really like that like, become the wolf and not the lamb ..

Looking forward to more from you!