The Feeling. (Big Sister)

The Feeling. (Big Sister)

A Poem by The Lost Soul
"

I will miss you when you leave, Brea. Don't forget me. Your little sister...

"

Much time has passed,

Since I have last seen you.

Your face, I still remember.

Your voice, I will never forget.

The way I felt being with you,

Changed my view on life.

Never again to turn back,

Into the self-loathing person, I was.

You will stay with me.

Though you are not here.

My friend.

My love-dearest.

My family.

My pet.

I am always thinking of you.

My big sister.

I love thee now.

I love thee forever.

When you left,

I cried.

When you stayed,

I lied.

I wish you were here,

To see me.

To see her.

We miss your smile.

We miss your laugh.

I miss you all together.

I close my eyes to see you.

Always here with me.

In my heart,

You will always remain.

I love you big sister.

Do not ever forget.

I cry for you.

I bleed for you.

I live for you.

I would die for you.

I love you so.

Please,

Do not ever forget me.

I will not forget you.

© 2010 The Lost Soul


Author's Note

The Lost Soul
A poem I wrote for my 'older sister' Brea Kaufman..

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This is a poem bursting with emotion...well done :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lot of emotions and very heartfelt, the only thing I didn't like was the line "My love-dearest" I think it would sound better as My dearest love. Keep writing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 31, 2010
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Tags: departure, The Lost Soul, Brea Kaufman

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The Lost Soul
The Lost Soul

Johnstown, PA



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Well, I love writing poetry, fan fictions, and just anything that comes to mind when I have a pencil and paper. I am an Anime artist as well. Some of my art work goes with my writings. If you would li.. more..

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