Our scars

Our scars

A Poem by The Water Queen

Our scars remind us

who we have become

Our anger will never let

us forget it.

My tears are eternal.

Your face haunts my dreams

And that is my only regret

© 2009 The Water Queen


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this reminds me of everything ive went through and how our scars are a reminder that not only it happened but that we made it through what happened and it also reminds me of the song scars but anyway great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Short but sweet

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Love this !! Really good write !! Short but sweet

Posted 11 Years Ago


Short but to the point. Your words are powerful here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


You dropped a bomb on this one. Few words, yet many emotions come to surface. Great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Excellent write. Short and yet full of power and emotion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very good. It's such a little poem but bears so much. I love every sentence in it. Really good job there!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I would struggle to get such emotion from such few words. Kudos :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very powerful for regretness. I love it, good job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


powerful thinking here. I like this.
Deep and well stated!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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