Free You Tonight

Free You Tonight

A Poem by The Water Queen
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A girl fed up with loving a man who treats her like crap. Finally She sets him free

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Can anybody tell me what I did today

And why- I cried- into my pillow

And for some reason I can't say my last goodbye

And this- is when- I will cry-mmmmm

 

And I still believe in Love

And I stil believe in life

I want to be alright

I want to free you tonight

And I still believe in Love

And I stil believe in life

I want to be alright

I want to free you tonight

 

And staring deep into your eyes

I know that I must let go

And I know- that the- stng has begun

The day is going by- as we passy by

I thank you for every I love you

and your life-mmmmm

 

And I still believe in Love

And I stil believe in life

I want to be alright

I want to free you tonight

And I still believe in Love

And I stil believe in life

I want to be alright

I want to free you-----

And I'm dying- watching as your loving. And I'm down here on my knees.

How can I survive.

Your turn to me and promise me your everything.

That you;ll be waiting

Till you have returned.

 

And I still believe in Love

And I stil believe in life

I want to be alright

I want to free you tonight

And I can't see you

And you have vanished

And I gave you the sun

It's time to free you----

Tonight!

© 2009 The Water Queen


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Oh Wow I liked this alot.
This is wonderful!
I can feel the flow

Posted 12 Years Ago


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i can hear this set to some guitar chords and wahla you have a beautiful song. Who know it might be the next hit!

Posted 12 Years Ago


It just needs the perfect musical notes! ;-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


so. this is basically fantastic. and you should make it into a song. because it would be epic. i really like the concept of her setting him free rather than him dumping her off. that makes my day because women are strong. this is very well written. great job. (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very emotional and outstanding poem. Your a very talented writer, that's for sure.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amazing

Posted 12 Years Ago


exceptional..that what it is....

Posted 12 Years Ago


That was so beautiful. I loved it. Well done! Please, NEVER stop writing in your life!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very good, I love it. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 25, 2009

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The Water Queen
The Water Queen

Lehi, UT



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