A Stranger in my bed

A Stranger in my bed

A Poem by The Water Queen

 I awoke to find a stranger in my bed

This stranger well he had no head

 And when I went to find out his name

 All we did was play a silly game.

© 2010 The Water Queen


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Interesting.. I guess this could be read two ways.. Like in a dream, or when one wakes and there is someone they have no clue on who they are, yet somehow (Okay we brought them home) lol We wish them gone.. I may be wrong, but that's my take on it.

Mags xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is quite different. Umm was the man actually a woman??? the last line throws me off a little making me think that he was actually a woman pretending to be an man. I find this very creative.

Posted 13 Years Ago


interesting piece ... sometimes love is like a game of up and downs ... a silly game indeed..nice job ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice flow...interesting poem...makes me think about relationships that have lost their spark

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, seems to me this is an attempt to make light at some of the dalliances we have. And it certainly can be a silly game. Sometimes we do it self-destructively to ourselves, therefor the cuteness of the poem becomes something of a disconnect. Very nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting.. I guess this could be read two ways.. Like in a dream, or when one wakes and there is someone they have no clue on who they are, yet somehow (Okay we brought them home) lol We wish them gone.. I may be wrong, but that's my take on it.

Mags xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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