A Poem by Alexa Aiden

I am watching you, darling
I crave you
but the distance is bigger then us.
I feel potent today
and open like a flower that lusts for the rain

I am open

I am seeking out comfort
in the form of eyes watching me as I come near
Waving hello as a smile possesses us
in good company.

© 2010 Alexa Aiden

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that is really goo i like that it is short but you have put descriptive stuff into it i think that this is really good.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Very nice, and descriptive. Loved it :D

Posted 9 Years Ago

Short and sweet.

Posted 9 Years Ago

A nice short poem. Interesting use of words.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is wonderful; a lot said with very few lines. The best kind.

I also enjoy your playing of words. Love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on September 7, 2010
Last Updated on September 7, 2010


Alexa Aiden
Alexa Aiden

Hollywood, CA

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