I Said No.

I Said No.

A Poem by L.E.Osborne
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A poem of my personal experience with consent... the utter lack of it that is.

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A smile.
A look.
A text.
 A f**k.
A hand.
Then two.
A jerk.
Like you.

One friend.
One step.
One kiss.
  Regret.
One hand.
Now three.
Let go of me.

My tongue.
My mouth.
My fear.
 And doubt.
I moved.
Too slow
But I still,
said NO.

© 2014 L.E.Osborne


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L.E.Osborne
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Hello L.E.Osborne,

I have crawled out of my shell of hiding and was greeted by this wonderful poem. Wonderful, wonderful work you have done here. If there is a definition for perfection, it would be this. I love the emotion in this poem and the simplistic approach here. This is AWESOME.

A very impressed,
Shogun

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Gee
Far to many arseholes about who have little or no respect for women. And how this has been helped by America putting Donald in charge, tut, tut, tut.
Hope no man takes liberties with my daughter, grrrrrrrrr.



Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

L.E.Osborne

5 Years Ago

Again a poem I have't looked at in years but still I can remember exactly who I wrote it about. I ho.. read more
OMG! I LOVE THIS POEM!
Just the way you have worded it!
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent, too many times the line is crossed by men and they think it's some kind of joke.
I'm not dropping all men in the same bucket but it's just a shame that some guys are asses.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the short concise lines add such drive and power.. the flow made this easy to read and let our minds get lost into your words, which made it all the more intense.. I like the format and the way you constructed it.. rhymes didn't feel forced...

no means no.. doesn't matter what happened before.. and unfortunately some people don't look at it that way.. I can relate and think that adds more effect to the piece.. well done..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hello L.E.Osborne,

I have crawled out of my shell of hiding and was greeted by this wonderful poem. Wonderful, wonderful work you have done here. If there is a definition for perfection, it would be this. I love the emotion in this poem and the simplistic approach here. This is AWESOME.

A very impressed,
Shogun

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a great piece of work! Such emotion :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


L.E.Osborne

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Jamie

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome :)

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Manchester, Lancashire, United Kingdom



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