You Brave Soul

You Brave Soul

A Poem by Thoctar
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Different than the work I have been posting lately, but things change and so do poems. Enjoy!

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You Brave Soul

Pain, Suffering
Hurt, Destruction
Mind and Body
Soul and Heart
Oh you have suffered…..
In your short life, what you have endured…
What you have to look back upon
What the future holds
Oh You Brave, Brave soul…
Oh You wonderful, selfless person…
If only back then I could have
Realized all this about you
Oh if only..
You had been spared all of it…

Bringing the pain of the world
Upon yourself….The crushing weight of it all
Stamping down upon your heart…
And yet you continued on
You didn’t give up
You didn’t end it all…
You endured all of that…
For this world that has abused you so….
Oh You Brave Soul
If only I could help…
If only I could take your pain away…
If only I could have helped more
Back in those times…
If only in your times of need…
I could have been there for you more….
If only…
And yet after all you have endured….
You continue to be strong…
Strong and kind…
Even denigrating yourself
When really it is the world that has inflicted
Upon you that truly deserves that..
Oh You Brave Soul
Pain, Suffering
Hurt, Destruction
Mind and Body
Soul and Heart
Oh you have suffered…..
In your short life, what you have endured…
What you have to look back upon
What the future holds
Oh You Brave, Brave soul…
Oh You wonderful, selfless person…
If only back then I could have
Realized all this about you
Oh if only..
You had been spared all of it…
If only I could have taken away your pain…

© 2011 Thoctar


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Thoctar
Thoctar

New Liskeard, Northern Ontario, Canada



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Interested in history, politics, ideology, really anything intelligent. Always willing to accept criticism, I can only get better. I write poems occasionally, I never saw them as good, but some friend.. more..

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