Alive

Alive

A Poem by Thoctar
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Alive


When I feel Alive
When I feel like I am worth something
When I feel I have a purpose
I am invincible

I cannot be stopped
I can do anything I want to
But I have one hidden enemy amongst it all
Myself

My own mind
My own soul
Stabbing me in the back
As I fall upon the ground
I look back up at myself
And I am devoured

Losing all purpose
All desire to act
All protection from pain

Oh it hurts!
Oh the pain!
I may still be Alive!
But it is living agony itself….

I reach out into the dark
As I spiral down into nothingness
I ask questions
Looking for something
Anything to save me
To bring me back to life
To keep me Alive
And then when that too fails me

When I feel Alive
When I feel like I am worth something
When I feel I have a purpose
I am invincible

I cannot be stopped
I can do anything I want to
But I have one hidden enemy amongst it all
Myself

My own mind
My own soul
Stabbing me in the back
As I fall upon the ground
I look back up at myself
And I am devoured

© 2011 Thoctar


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Thoctar
Thoctar

New Liskeard, Northern Ontario, Canada



About
Interested in history, politics, ideology, really anything intelligent. Always willing to accept criticism, I can only get better. I write poems occasionally, I never saw them as good, but some friend.. more..

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A Poem by Thoctar