Forever Gone

Forever Gone

A Poem by Thorn
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This was inspired, at first, by the death of my rabbit. R.I.P, little bunny.

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Maybe if I’d been observant,

Maybe if I’d seen…

 

That the problems that were troubling you were more than they had seemed.

 

Then perhaps this could have been resolved,

This cruel affliction cured.

Perhaps you would have seen the day

And I’d have kept my word.

 

But now you lie as limp as rags,

 

Beneath the rain soaked ground.

Your eyes blank and glassy,

And your soul heaven bound.

 

Never will you see the light,

 

Only darkness do you taste.

Just another carcass in the mud,

Another life at waste.

© 2009 Thorn


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Wow. And this was about a little bunny? Wow. This actually made me cry a little. And like... I'll cry over really emtional stories and stuff, but a POEM?!? Wow. You have got some EXTREME talent. You made me cry. Well.. I'm sure most of it was because I was imagining a little bunny while I was reading it, but hey... You still made me cry off a poem. You got tallllent! Keep writing!!!

--Blood

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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WOW!!! That was intense. It was a great read. I love bunnies, and Im sorry yours passed away! :o(

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Masterful work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. And this was about a little bunny? Wow. This actually made me cry a little. And like... I'll cry over really emtional stories and stuff, but a POEM?!? Wow. You have got some EXTREME talent. You made me cry. Well.. I'm sure most of it was because I was imagining a little bunny while I was reading it, but hey... You still made me cry off a poem. You got tallllent! Keep writing!!!

--Blood

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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A city with roads in it, New Zealand



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I'm Thorn. I like sushi, and my pet axolotl, Mexie. I enjoy sailing, writing, and acting. And playing my flute. ^^ I dislike maths, trying to memorise Shakespeare, and being wrong. But I love my c.. more..

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