The Beauty in Fall

Thoughts on healing and recovery

Colors,

            trees of dusk

Smells,

            rains of memories

What makes so charming,

a swan song of nature?

The cardinal reds and amber yellows?

The fiery rebellion to an end

(of a cycle?)

Grey skies of pouring rain

First bites of cold days

Burn of a hot drink in your chest?

What makes so charming,

a swan song of nature?

The routine of daily life is stopped by bursts

            of wind

                        of rain

The familiar bustle of days

Recalling moments before,

    Of walking down those same streets

    Of pausing to those same lights

 

Over, and over -in effect,

To remind; what makes so charming,

a swan song of nature

Reviews

[Sonakshi Arora]

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Your choice of words is so apt. I love your para phrasing. This poetry conveys a very strong message through beautiful words.

[Threads]

Thank you for the compliment! Can you think of anything I could do to improve? Any line that seems a bit funny or out of place?
Either way thanks for the feedback.
-Threads