New World

All alone in an unknown place,
Fear consumes all you know,
You run away, being chased,
Having no other place to go.
Looking back at spread arms,
You, will not be tricked,
They promise no harm,
But you know the speech is fixed.
Finally you stop out of breath,
Adrenaline used long ago,
You shut your eyes in fear of death,
But they only have love to show.

Reviews

[Odayin]

I love where you got the idea from and the way you portrayed. Nicely done

[0AudreyClaire0]

I really like this. The rhyming is great as well as the flow of the poem. Great job. :)
-Aud