Lost Love

ode to hip-hop

Used to be down for this girl since the 1st grade
Just seen her the other day, changed it up, I feel played
flossin jewels, all bout materials, drivin the most expensive
cars, so I approached her like I was apprehensive
and asked her, I thought you died in '96, in September
to be exact, cuz you don't look the same as I remember
She said , I went and switched up my style, now people know me
They don't care about talent, look at the love they show me
is second to none, money is nice, I hope it never ends
By any means necessary, don't care how many friends
I gotta diss and betray to get it, I'mma get it
So I took the mic from her, told her she forgot how to spit it
You clearly changed through the years, my crush is now retracted
I'm ashamed I fantasized about ya, used to be attracted
to ya, now I see you're ugly on the inside, fake on the out
forgot where ya came from, disrespectin what you're about
Remember when you taught me about coasts, the south
was my favorite subject, can't believe a word comin outta your lyin a*s mouth
from now on, see you danicn on my tv, I'mma turn it off
like a tic on my skin, I guess I gotta burn it off
Maybe I'll see ya again one day, you and me
can hang like we used to, just incase, rest in peace.
 

Reviews

[Cynari]

I loved it!
Yes, true hip hop has been MIA for awhile now...sad isn't it? Take care :-)

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

This is very good... It had a great flow to it as if it was a song. There were spelling mistakes but my guess is that it was intentional... I like the feel and the message in this poem. It's so sad how people feel they must put on a "mask" to be loved and change everything about themselves just to be liked by false friends. This was really good. Great job!