Silent Love

Silent Love

A Poem by Tian
"

" I close my eyes and the world drops dead. I think I made him up inside my head " -- Sylvia Plath

"

Reborn, I tried again

To soar through the bright skies

to gain what was lost.

So I stood in my rightful place,

Next to you,

And start, my silent love.


I stood next to you;

So close, yet so far.

When can I ever catch up?

But don’t fear and stand close.

Hold your smile

And continue, my silent love.


I stood near to you;

Our shadows, refusing to intertwine.

Why am I a puppet of love?

But continue and follow on.

Hold your heart

And keep it in, my silent love.


Left behind, I realise

I was trying to take flight

with broken wings.

Stranded away, ostracized

Left by you,

And suffer from, my silent love.

© 2018 Tian


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I SO can relate t trying to fly with broken wings. There is nothing quite like the alienation that you feel when the rest of the world moves on without you. Stay strong, you're silent love won't give you broken wings forever.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tian

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the review!
and my wings are currently mending :)
B_SouthPaw

1 Year Ago

Well they will be the most beautiful wings when they have healed I am sure :)
The second stanza!!! Very nice and fits completely with the title!
Also i have a poetry competition that i would love for you to enter! It ends in a couple days so i hope to see a submission from you! Keep writing! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tian

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the review!
and I submit my poem to the competition :)
the painful love is described in the poem, i like the title itself silent love but it still speaks volumes to us the readers. nice piece of writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tian

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the review! :)
sette

1 Year Ago

you are most welcome

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