Dream

Dream

A Poem by Tieren al'Kearn
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This was a poem I wrote when I was 18, one of my originals.

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I wish I knew,

Just what to do.

All I do is lie here,

And dream of you.

 

The way the wind,

Moves through your hair.

Full of nothing,

But shimmer and flare.

 

They way your eyes,

Cause me to grin.

For no matter what I try,

They draw me deep within.

 

Your skin so soft,

Warm and smooth.

Your soul so kind,

And full of truth.

 

If you are a dream,

I hope to never awake.

But if you are not,

You would be well worth the wait.

© 2008 Tieren al'Kearn


Author's Note

Tieren al'Kearn
I am reminiscing my past works. This was one of the first poems I did after I left Carson City, back in '02

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That was sweet! ^^ I have to admit, the font really makes it sound like a dream. ;)

Anyways, great imagery with this; it really gives me a vivid picture of this dream of yours. lol Excellent flow too! But I sort of expected that because of how small stanzas were. ^^ Great work! :)

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Simplistic and cute. It sounds just like a dream. Fantastic emotion and Great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


That was sweet! ^^ I have to admit, the font really makes it sound like a dream. ;)

Anyways, great imagery with this; it really gives me a vivid picture of this dream of yours. lol Excellent flow too! But I sort of expected that because of how small stanzas were. ^^ Great work! :)

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Aw, this was so cute.^^ It was simple and sweet - the kind of poem one rarely finds anymore. Great job - this put a smile on my face. =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

such a beautiful poem! very well written! great job.
laceyjane

Posted 11 Years Ago


But if you are not,
You would be well worth the wait.

Beautiful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Your skind so soft,

skind-skin

very nice flow, imagery and the honest release of your emotions for your crush :D rhyming scheme worked nicely as well

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Tieren al'Kearn
Tieren al'Kearn

Carson City, NV



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