Fiction Character

Fiction Character

A Poem by Chip
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I think the poem speaks much for itself. Just searching for that someone who you only know as fiction right now.

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I want to be the one,

To hold you,

To hug you,

To kiss you.

 

My heart is paralyzed,

And now it’s lost,

In the abyss searching,

But you are untouchable.

 

In my dreams I wander,

I meet you and we touch,

But when the sun arises,

My heart falls with you.

 

Yet the days go on,

And I still search,

But the only one on my mind,

Is my fiction character.

© 2012 Chip


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The feeling of searching for that special someone that you just haven't met yet (outside dreams, of course) is one that I think many people feel. I know I do! This poem reminds me a lot of Michael Buble's song, "Haven't Met You Yet".

It's written very well, too!

Posted 8 Years Ago


this poem touches my soul...great chip

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is really good! I liked the emotion expressed

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chip

9 Years Ago

Good :)
simply beautiful ...i love it

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chip

9 Years Ago

Thankies! :D

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Added on August 24, 2012
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Tags: love, romance, heart break, loneliness, sad

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Chip
Chip

Newry, United Kingdom



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Hello! I have a fairly massive/strong interest in computers, and a love affair with Tomb Raider. As for my poetry, I use it as a way to let out my feelings. :) more..

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