twin stars

twin stars

A Story by TimelordReaper

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Day one, I saw the boy with the star on his hand,

     "Miku wake up, its time for school and breakfest is ready!"

"uhh, ok mom be right down!"

Miku looks around her room staring at all the colors and her trinkets she looks towards her closet, its dark in there it looks as if someone is hiding in it. She immediately runs over and turn's the light on, she saw all the shadows vanish, she tseps in and grab's out a blue long sleave shirt, long black skinny jeans and blue laced knee high converse. She reaches for the top shelf and grabs a blue necklace with a silver star on it she holds it in her hands for a few seconds and remembers how she got it when her father died a strange boy came up to her wearing a black necklace with black star on it he gave her a blue string and the silver star he said sorry for your loss then left, after that puts it on. Then she goes into the bathroom does her hair getting all the knots out puts on purfume then when shes done with everything she runs down stairs. Running by, she grabs a piece of toast with eggs on top of it, and a glass of milk downing the glass in a few seconds then out the door running and eating her toast with eggs on top of it. She makes it to school almost late but still in time, she runs into class and walks over to her friends droping her backpack and sitting down, and joining in the conversation.

"No thats not possible mizune, Demons do not exist!"

"Yes they do, I caught one on camera, SEE!"

"thats a picture of a pitch black alley idoit!"

"No see the red glowing eyes!"

"What red eyes?"

"Ah, argueing as usaual mizune and suki?"


all the sudden the door bursted open it was the teacher ms. suku with two new students.

"All right class here are, are new students Kitaro, and um sorry whats ur name again?"


Miku stared at konan and her long dark blue hair, her eyes pitch black, she was wearing all black, black t shirt, black skirt, and knee high converse with black laces. Than at kitaro and his wavy long black hair, his brilliant yellow eyes, his long sleave black shirt with black skinny jeans, and black converse with yellow laces. Then her eyes widend she noticed a black necklace and a black star on it she thought to herself "that looks almost like mine."  She looks away quikly and starts doing her math, but still wondering? Kitaro walks over and sits down next to miku, he looks at her necklace and smirks remembering it. He looks over at konan who is glaring at miku. kitaro lifts up his right hand and pointing her pointer finger up and moving it left and right as if saying "don't even think about it!" konan glares at him and looks away focusing of her work. Kitaro looks around the class room and back to miku staring at her milk chocolate hair, her ocean blue eyes that you get lost in. All the sudden miku looked up and saw kitaro staring at her. They both freaked out and stared away both blushing and sometimes glancing at eachother only for a moment.

© 2011 TimelordReaper



Posted 9 Years Ago

nice going! when's the next chapter??

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Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what a cute story!!!

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Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

keep it up~ and since you didn't want me to say anything else... :)

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Posted 9 Years Ago

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