D. gray man OC

D. gray man OC

A Story by TimelordReaper

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A boy with black spiky hair and dark tan skin with black cross marks on his forehead looked out onto the burning city with his brilliant yellow eyes. A fat person walked up next to him, he was holding a umbrella with a pumkin on top of it the pumkin had a face and looked as if could talk, three other people walked up there skin was a greyish tan with black marks that looked like crosses on there foreheads they had the same apperance as kitaro just in skin color and black crosses on there foreheads. The fat person with his grey skin and long ponty ears and nose with a hudge teethy smile that looked as if he could not stop smiling reached up and wiggled his speacticals.

"Nice job kitaro" the fat man spoke staring at the burning city.

"No problem lord millenium" kitaro said with a blank expression.

Kitaro turned to leave but was stoped by two of the dark skined people.

"What do you want jasdebi?" kitaro said raising an eye brow waiting for one of them to answer.

"Kitaro how do you do it so easily? Aren't you afriad to die?" The blonde one answerd gigiling.

"It comes naturaly and I am not afriad to die cause i am already dead." kitaro said walking past them. Kitaro said good by to the earl and then left threw a portal of dark matter appearing somewhere else he walked past a sign into a building the sign saying "black order of italy" he walked into the building his apperance changing. his skin turned into a pale white his eyes changing brilliant blue his black spiky hair stayed the same same, but his clothes changed he was now in a black hoodie and black skinny jeans with black converse with dark blue laces. He walked into a room greeted by several friends one of them painting without even moving her arms, a girl with tan skin and a scarf and red headphones around her neck her name Yuko, she was wearing a grey button up black hoodie she was rushing over,

"how was ur trip? It was amazing I bet" she said excited while giving him a death grip hug.

"It was entertaining" kitaro said looking away and walking towards the orginization leader "any missions i can go on" kitaro asked.

"Uh actually yes you can go with juno and yuko on there mission to russia to give innocence to someone and alot of akuma sightings, yuko come over here!" the leader said stressed.

"Yes comander" Yuko said excitedly with juno standing next to her.

"Kitaro will be assisting you and you will bring two inocent akuma with you this one will be difficult there have been sightings of even some noah there so yes leave at once bye-bye" there leader said stressed and evily.

Kitaro put on his outfit it was black and silver with the orginization symbol on it yuko and juno did there same just blue and silver outfit they walked away yuko had a small silver and black golem following her kitaro had a white and black one it slightly glowing blue he also had a larg black and silver looking revolver, juno slightly hunched over with two hudge guns on her back and kitaro holding one black case yuko holding another then they walked out into a bright white light taking off to russia.

© 2011 TimelordReaper


Author's Note

TimelordReaper
Hope you like will be more soon and SORRY IF BAD GRAMMER AND SPELLING!! XD



Reviews

Oh! Oh! Oh! there'smore! and I am in it! Yaya! Riley you're so brilliant making Pikachu the Innocence of Sarah.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was a good chapter and I like how you used the elements of D. Gray-Man in it...Why is the Earl fat lol and I see Xena eye is similar to Allen's although it has a different power

I also like the new addition of characters such as Kitaro, whom is bad a*s and Rachel, lol I like the part with the aliens

A good way to start your story, it wasn't too long or too short but just right...I will be looking forward to reading more : )

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Posted 12 Years Ago


AMAZING AS ALWAYS MAN!!!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


It was GREAT! just Miss Calsa _> Mrs. Khalsa

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Posted 12 Years Ago


That was so AWESOME!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh no! Poor Rachel! Keep it up!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


read it agian i updated it!!


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Posted 12 Years Ago


AHHH! I'm injoured! I need help! Hurry and get me healed! I liked my part a lot. Keep it up!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


very nice discriptions. I want ask what happens next but i think i want to be suprised more! So you're a double agent? Ooh this is getting very interesting! ;)

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Ha, ha! I like how you called the Milenium Earl fat. Its true. He is fat for some reason. I can't wait till you put me in! Keep it up!

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Posted 12 Years Ago



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TimelordReaper
TimelordReaper

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